THE CUBS CLOSE OUT THE LOS ANGELES DODGERS TO GO TO THE WORLD SERIES FOR THE FIRST TIME IN 71 YEARS!
October 25, 2016
On October 22, at 7:08 2016 the Chicago Cubs beat the Los Angeles Dodgers 5-0 in Wrigley Field Chicago Illinois. This game decided which team goes to the World Series and, this will be the first time in 71 years the Chicago Cubs are going to the World Series. Also the last time the Cubs won the World Series was in 1908. The Cubs will be facing the Cleveland Indians in a match that both teams haven't won a championship game in decades and decades and, the last time the Indians won a championship game was in 1948.
I like what you wrote but you need to string it into 3 different paragraphs. Also the last sentance is a run on sentance so you might want to split it up. Lastly the fact about the last time the cubs went to the championship was said twice. But otherwise nice job.
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